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:iconmasokiist:
It's nice! I can fully appreciate the things you are trying to put into here. But it says advanced critique encouraged so here's my piece ^^

I think that the image should be larger, with the horse in a corner or something on the full scale image. Or maybe that's just my opinion because that's how I do my styles :O Second I think the chain should be around the dude's neck instead of his shoulders, because that's where it would slide if it were real and it just makes it more ... idk whats the word, urgent? I'll use 'chaining' cuz its irony<3 I like the explicitness of the eye but the tear could be fixed a little, it's kinda sharp. And the faded text in the background is a little too overdone, and you could possibly use a simpler one for the main text.

Other than that, amazing! I love the dust and the chain effect, I absolutely couldn't make the chain look like it was actually around the horse =D
:icontantrum-designs:
thank you for the critique,i appreciate it=D

ill try to fix it up
:iconmasokiist:
!! Yes! I like! lol :hug:

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